-the first selection wasn't that difficult to
understand if you read carefully. Like any other selection on other AP tests.
-Both poems were really hard for me to
understand. I feel like if I knew the poetry terms better, I could've have
gotten more questions right.
-Since the poems required me to REALLY
understand the poem in order to answer the questions correctly, I had to re-read
the poems again and that was time consuming. Since I was timing myself, I had
to guess in the last few questions which I didn't really do well in.
*Essays
-even though I did not fully understand the
first selection, I used Pathos and dialogue as the techniques Eliot used and
since I am comfortable with these two, I was able to make a coherent essay in
the 35 minutes the prompt said.
-For the second essay, I choose The Grapes of
Wrath. I read this book last year and the details weren't that clear to me.
Even though I managed to write a 4 paragraph essay on this one, I feel like I could
improve it.
-for both essays I have more than enough time
to finish. That’s why I feel like I did a poor job on them.
The essays I analyzed belong to Marisol Duarte.
1987 essay Evaluations
Essay 1:
-gives examples of devices used to convey the author's views
-quotes the text
-the analysis is superficial
-I would give this a 4-5 because it can be understood but it does not analyze the text deeply
Essay 2:
-does not specify what change is being promoted
-gives examples of changes, but they were not included in the introductory paragraph
-does not analyze the text deeply
-the essay does not show deep understanding of the message the book was portraying
-I would give this essay a 4.
The essays I analyzed belong to Marisol Duarte.
1987 essay Evaluations
Essay 1:
-gives examples of devices used to convey the author's views
-quotes the text
-the analysis is superficial
-I would give this a 4-5 because it can be understood but it does not analyze the text deeply
Essay 2:
-does not specify what change is being promoted
-gives examples of changes, but they were not included in the introductory paragraph
-does not analyze the text deeply
-the essay does not show deep understanding of the message the book was portraying
-I would give this essay a 4.
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